maokai09's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Alien Girl]

Love the design; in my opinion, the green parts of the (I'm assuming latex) suit of her abdomen and breasts form to look like an up-side-down penis to me with the crotch cup as its tip. Was that intentional? Probably was...would make sense.

Evil-Rick responds:

Well, these Aliens are actually futas so...

[Goth girl]

YES! PLEASE!! I'm pleading on my knees for this to be, can't you see? Doujinshi is the key, I decree, damn the fees! Oh gee, just listen to me & everyone else sounding so similarly for the need we all believe...IN!

NameSpaceNG responds:

very enthusiatic for the doujinshi

[Darling David's Quirk]

What quirk is this?

DavidandBE responds:

He can make his drawings come to life. He can summon multiple things at once BUT he can run out of ink for his arms if he keeps on over exerting himself.

[Caty Portrait]

What's she up to these days?

OddmireAsh responds:

Livin too far from me haha but I'm hoping to have her over pretty soon to record another podcast

[Tethys' obligatory sexy pose]

the hell am i lookin at again?

mematron responds:

You need to go through all of my art for the answers. Since you bothered to rate and comment, you might as well go the extra step and explore what I'm working on. Either that or wait until I release it.

[Caught Changing]

and i wouldn't "change" a thing about it

OddmireAsh responds:

haha yeah :)

[Tom Lucitor]

It honestly looks like it was fun, thanks.

EduardoDraw responds:

yeah it was :D hopefully i can draw more fan art about these series

[Super Social Justice Jedi Duel]

Hilarious...

curtsibling responds:

Darth Hilarious.

[Good old Hockey Game [APH]]

Man, sports fans are phucking stupid...but then again, so is most of humanity; no offense--sorry if any one takes offense.

Paint-Corpse responds:

No offense taken! Die hard fans of anything can be incredibly irritating.

[Aitia - Page 2]

Loud & clear here. Got any tips on paneling?

MarikBentusi responds:

I wish, that is specifically something I'm still trying to learn myself! These are some of the lessons I've learned, maybe you can get something out of them:

- crazy/weird panels are fun and look cool, but lose impact when used too frequently.

- include speech bubble text early in the sketching phase so you can work around them.

- getting something out of the way by squeezing a lot of panels into one page is tempting, but it's usually better to have fewer bigger and clearer panels, especially if you need to visually explain something clearly.

- during speech-heavy segments, some panels with little to no text can help with "infodump digestion", similar to how blank lines and one-line-paragraphs can break up a wall of text.

- Just how you preferably end a sentence in a speech bubble instead of splitting it up, it's usually best if an action doesn't begin in the last panel of a page and continues in the first panel of the next page. In a case like that it's usually better to move that last panel to the next page and either resize the other panels on the current page or add a little filler panel.

Hope that helps!