maokai09's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Tom Lucitor]

It honestly looks like it was fun, thanks.

EduardoDraw responds:

yeah it was :D hopefully i can draw more fan art about these series

[Super Social Justice Jedi Duel]

Hilarious...

curtsibling responds:

Darth Hilarious.

[Good old Hockey Game [APH]]

Man, sports fans are phucking stupid...but then again, so is most of humanity; no offense--sorry if any one takes offense.

Paint-Corpse responds:

No offense taken! Die hard fans of anything can be incredibly irritating.

[Aitia - Page 2]

Loud & clear here. Got any tips on paneling?

MarikBentusi responds:

I wish, that is specifically something I'm still trying to learn myself! These are some of the lessons I've learned, maybe you can get something out of them:

- crazy/weird panels are fun and look cool, but lose impact when used too frequently.

- include speech bubble text early in the sketching phase so you can work around them.

- getting something out of the way by squeezing a lot of panels into one page is tempting, but it's usually better to have fewer bigger and clearer panels, especially if you need to visually explain something clearly.

- during speech-heavy segments, some panels with little to no text can help with "infodump digestion", similar to how blank lines and one-line-paragraphs can break up a wall of text.

- Just how you preferably end a sentence in a speech bubble instead of splitting it up, it's usually best if an action doesn't begin in the last panel of a page and continues in the first panel of the next page. In a case like that it's usually better to move that last panel to the next page and either resize the other panels on the current page or add a little filler panel.

Hope that helps!

[magic ball]

i love it! the ball could look a little less flesh colored unless that's yellow light...

moonlight1234 responds:

yeah i agree on the ball i'll be redrawing it at some-point gonna try coloring it blue or green instead think it should fix the look of it cause the yellow is too close to the skin tone

[nuke]

Nuke what? Canadia?

antichlorine responds:

its his name

[Goth Mistress]

i like goth, can you make her petite?

XCaspeRX responds:

I could... maybe sometime in the future

[chompl]

Do they have a name? I'm thinking...Dahlia.

mogy64 responds:

she has one but i like keeping it secret, so shes just chomp! dahlia is a cute name tho lol

[Secret Woman Weapon]

I like Miu (sort of) but dislike that peppy archetype; she's sexy though a bit much like Ibuki Mioda. Do you like her too? I am certain your ass shots will improve then when it does you can bust a move just get into your groove but don't forget your lube my dude/dudette.

ZenoStriker responds:

I actually like Miu, she kept me entertained while playing through the game. She was one of the first characters whose relationship thing I maxed out

[Emo girl 2 Sfw]

Did she actually shit herself?

MarvinAnimation responds:

no lol just a random word plus she is basicaly said shit.. like you bullshitting. lol